I"m bored out of my skull so I thought I'd try an experiment...I"m gonna try to write a song as I sit here and keep you posted along the way... Ok...I've got a good lick going with the guitar.  Hard to imagine I know but trust me it's a good one . I think the chorus is ok... even though you crushed my my heart, it broke apartbut I'm still standingeven though you stole my breath, it was just a testcause I'm still standingeven though you made me cry, i could almost diebut I'm still standingI'm no different than how I used to be Problems with the verses...ugh The first time I saw you there, I could only stare, my world in motionHoping for a fleeting glance, hint of romance, full of emotion Damn...block...maybe a change of strumming pattern .  They say you should write about what you know...ok then...  Staring at the walls we painted togetherBright colors that shone through any kind of weatherNow they've faded and cracks show throughIt's just not the same without you The CD mix you gave to meSongs about love and sincerityI never really listened to the words they sangBut now every song makes me feel this pain Can't think what else...maybe something about playstation or shopping   And now for a big 5 minute solo followed by some breakfast...and a movie. And that ladies and gentlemen is why I've never finished a song in my life! 

hahhahaha Thats cool !!

"but I'm still standing..."

I think Elton John may have something to say about that LOL

well.. u remind me the movie that i just went to see yesterday.. "Music and Lyric" don't know why.... but keep going guy!

The first time I saw you there, I could only stare

Hoping for a fleeting glance, hint of romance, full of emotion

those could be changed to something a bit more powerful. i think the chorus is pretty good.

Thanks. I'll take suggestions. Anything decent earns a dinner and writing credits.

Davefenn: "Don't write me off...just yet"

I think it's a very good one. Just take a rest and then back to read it again. Take yourself in peaceful a bit then you will know what to be changed to be more fascinated.

I wanna be able to write a song or a novel sometimes lol anyway u need to add more rhymes to your song!