could u plz help me fix my english....

i need to use this asap...

not sure people will understand

what i'm trying to explain...

is there any error u can see

or how can i make it better..?

"Residences are in the concept of Chinese nature elements

or “Wu Xing” that contain : Metal, Water, Wood, Fire & Earth.

The link between resident clusters are spaces of nature

therapies and spaces for health improvement which activities

are related to the “Rule of generating energy” of Wu xing"

actually there are more ...

i know it might coz ya a lil headache so this is enuff

my "The", "a" and "s"aargggg very confused me! :( :(

Question : Which one is right?

1. The link between resident clusters are....

2. The links between ...are spaces

3. Links between

4. Linkages Between

There are many links...

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sounds a lot better..!! i think :D :D

thxxxxxxxxxxxx !!!!!!!!!!!

thx again u r so jai dee

I would probably right it this way :

The residences are under the concept of Chinese Nature Elements or ?Wu Xing?. It consists of Metal, Water, Wood, Fire & Earth. The links between resident clusters are spaces intended for nature therapy and health improvement wtih activities related to Wu Xing's ?rule of generating energy?.

The concept of each Resident cluster is based upon one of the 5 Chinese natural elements Metal,Water,Wood,Fire & Earth (Wu xing)

Spaces between clusters are provided for activities involving nature and health improvement therapy.

Which incorporate Wu xing's "Rule of generating energy"

:D :D :D where hav ya been when i needed u da most N !!!!!!!!!

laragirl : thank you

N~ : thank you

biachung was the best

King

you're damn right about that King

Beer Leo is best ...

New version.....

"Residencies are in the concept of Chinese natural elements

or ?Wu Xing? that contain : Metal, Water, as well as Wood, Fire and Earth.

The link between resident clusters is the space of naturural

therapies and the space for health improvement which activities

are related to the ?Rule of generating energy? of Wu xing"

Wot u reckon er?

Think laragirl got it........bahhhh!!!!