sweetchubbyface Posted November 1, 2004 Report Share Posted November 1, 2004 This is my confession, my confession to you So much time has passed by, but nothings new I have tried to hide, hide how I feel But you have to know I love you, the pain is to real I have failed, failed to know how to love Because I was to scared when push came to shove Now I hurt, I hurt all the time What I have done to myself should be considered a crime Tried to wait, wait out this crush It turned to love, a heart suited flush At night I look, look at the stars Thinking one day that one might be ours Moments tick by, tick by thinking of you Fantasies not real, never to come true Here I am, I am lonely and alone Confessing my confession let the truth be shown This I couldn't see, couldn't see what would happen to me Now I pray that somehow you will set me free Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
music Posted November 1, 2004 Report Share Posted November 1, 2004 First, I'm utterly amazed how well your passage is written. I don't think there are too many native English speakers in TF who could have done as well. I'm glad to see that you've decided to express how you feel. How about changing your last line? something like: "Now I pray to set myself free" I believe that's something you must decide for yourself. I hope you're feeling better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sweetchubbyface Posted November 2, 2004 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2004 Thanks for your compliment. Actually I haven't told him yet. LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OutOfOrder Posted November 2, 2004 Report Share Posted November 2, 2004 DamN MYsELF for the way i StiLL FEEL the WaY i FeeL WhenEvER UR in My FaCE My CoMposuRE SiNKs, My TeMPeR RaiSe WheN i HEar YOU, MY HeaRt SOReS I WanT YoU CloSer - I WanT more It's An AwKWard SituaTion WheN I I'M being the One BEING LeFT BehinD I need a specification I need a declaration! What have I been doing To get this kind of attention? I need an answer...! I need to be clarified! What have to done To turn back and find, --- YOU, so devoted to HER And I'm just another FooL who's been just a FOOL Stupid enough to be TruSting YoU ...And at night, when you called me In your bedroom, where was she??? I wanna know how long have I Been so stupid, So Fuc*ing BLIND!?! Oh, my God -- I'm such a mess! I hate you so much I'm all wrecked I HATE YOU!! And i can't GeT thru this 'Cos I Hate you But I've got to admit ...That I love you And I LovE you most And I can't DeaL To be This ClosE IT's a FaiLure I must AdmiT That u NEver Loved ME Like how i Did ---------- When I see you, my heart sores Feels like I'm losing all the scores I feel like I'm falling to the ground My system's burning IT'S BREAKING DOWN. >>>>Wrote this for someone two years ago. But a year later, we went on a holiday together... and when he was parading around the resort top-naked with his pale jelly belly ~ I realized he was more like a 'brother'.>>>> )))My Dedication To You((( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
music Posted November 2, 2004 Report Share Posted November 2, 2004 >>>>Wrote this for someone two years ago. But a year later, we went on a holiday together... and when he was parading around the resort top-naked with his pale jelly belly ~ I realized he was more like a 'brother'.>>>> Pam, I'd like to hear you sing this! Sweetchubbyface, have you told him yet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sweetchubbyface Posted November 2, 2004 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2004 wow I love your Poem Pam!! It's really cool! It's exectly my stupid love life. Ha ha Ha .... I won't tell him....he 's worthless! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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