Steel Posted February 14, 2004 Report Share Posted February 14, 2004 Like to get out your emotions in words? Lets talk about love and tears.. No old poems please, lets use our emagination.. Lets make a chain.. I will start and challenge someone.. You do the same.. Lets start easy.. The love of your life has just left in the morning.. Make it to lines each person.. In the morning.. When I go out of bed.. I challenge kitty.. Steel Stunt poet.. at least.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted February 14, 2004 Report Share Posted February 14, 2004 Ok thank Steel.. In the morning.. When I go out of bed.. I went ahead... To the shower then I challenge Tham here you go Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
atomicflower Posted February 14, 2004 Report Share Posted February 14, 2004 poetry is definitely not my middle name, tham...but... i'm going to make this poem in 3 different ways and will challenge 3 more TFs. ; ) In the morning.. When I go out of bed.. I went ahead... To the shower but don't know what to take for me to make this early shower am i a duck? are you a duck? i need a duck that made of rubber! for this one i challenge...Bobby ------------------------------------- In the morning.. When I go out of bed.. I went ahead... To the shower but don't know what to take for me to make this early shower blur blur blur oh my hollow head. the brain must be misplaced. guess i forget it on my pillow. for this one..i challenge...daniesidhe, if he doesn't mind. ------------------------------------ In the morning.. When I go out of bed.. I went ahead... To the shower but don't know what to take for me to make this early shower tah dahhhh!!! maybe i should sing la lun lun la lun la lun la.... i am crazily singing like an atomicsinger. this one....i challenge John since he's an active TFs at the meantime. [Edited on 14/2/2004 by atomicflower] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Posted February 14, 2004 Report Share Posted February 14, 2004 I'm not much of a poet, but here it goes lol.. -------------------------------------------- In the morning.. When I go out of bed.. I went ahead... To the shower but don't know what to take for me to make this early shower tah dahhhh!!! maybe i should sing la lun lun la lun la lun la.... i am crazily singing like an atomicsinger. head banging and jumping, only to be interrupted by a phone ring, -------------------------------------------- ok, that was a pathetic try lol.. alrighty.. Hmm.. i challenge tammy_kuwaii -John- [Edited on 14/2/2004 by John] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bobbyboy112003 Posted February 14, 2004 Report Share Posted February 14, 2004 In the morning.. When I go out of bed.. I went ahead... To the shower but don't know what to take for me to make this early shower am i a duck? are you a duck? i need a duck that made of rubber! But only a duck is good for a bath, and I need to decide within an hour. Maybe I won't get Atomics wrath, if I choose to stay dirty for another hour. I challenge Gin Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gin Posted February 15, 2004 Report Share Posted February 15, 2004 in the morning.. i went out of bed.. i see my face in the mirror then my thought remind me of somebody but i tried not to think of so i went to bed, tried to get him out of my head my tought still go on with my tear falling off on my pillow tried to close my eyes, still hear him say good bye it'll never happened again.. it's gone... lol am i wrote too sad? i challenge anybody na ja gin margarita Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gin Posted February 15, 2004 Report Share Posted February 15, 2004 can i challenge ja? in the morning.. i went out of bed.. i see my face in the mirror then my thought remind me of somebody but i tried not to think of so i went to bed, tried to get him out of my head my tought still go on with my tear falling off on my pillow tried to close my eyes, still hear him say good bye it'll never happened again.. it's gone... Then I think about myself Am I in heaven or hell? I feel like a blind What is wrong and what is right? I don't know how to do I don't know where are you I know it is all over But you remind me forever Try to keep everything busy Hope to forget you finally But what my heart desires Only you exists in my mind. ------------------ after busy day my sky still look grey nobody cares nobody there only you exists in my mind am really blind ..... all day long only think of you i dont' know how to make you love me ask ask ask and ask but still no answer all i can notice i never stop love you.. at least when you don't have anyone around you.. could you please think of me...i'll be there to hold you like the sea hold the sand tight long....and long.. gin margarita [Edited on 15/2/2004 by Gin] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
babybarbiebangkok Posted February 15, 2004 Report Share Posted February 15, 2004 In the morning I went out of bed I was really a'fraid To take any shower Don't wanna even know I am so lonely in here Again beat my heart slow Where you were please What a good dream I had Someone I really missed My life fullfill with sad Come back to me Sis , it's my 1st Poem in English! OK? or need to rewrite ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel Posted February 19, 2004 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2004 I just want to thank everybody for the respons.. Looks like there is a few good poets out there! :-) Presume I will be back shortly.. When I have a new idea.. *Knock my head* On day I was sitting high up.. Chatting with a nice bird.. Feeling very happy.. Then I heard a crack.. And was flying.. Before i hit the ground.. *Holding on my leg and move slowly on my way* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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